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Don't tell me you love me,
if you dont think you do.

Don't promise me the world,
when you know it's not true.

Don't try to change me,
into something you want me to be

You said you liked me for me,
not something you thought I could be.

Don't lie to me,
when you tell me how much you care.
Because,by lying,
you're bound to have all the girls crying

-I'd like to thank Bluewolf189 for the ending
©2004-2009 ~Brittdabratt22
:iconbrittdabratt22:

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This is for all the girls who have been lied to by a guy so ya'll know where I'm coming from.

Oh and the end dosent rhyme too well so if you have something that sounds better please tell me!:D

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:iconbluewolf189:
The beggining is really great! Hmmm...Try adding on to your "you're bound to mess up." line and then stick the word "Crying" in it at the end somewhere... just a suggestion :)

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